ericpolley's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-TRAILER- Mournig darkness]

What program did you use here? The building pan movement was a bit odd, looked like a jpeg scrolling in place, almost like an N64 first person shooter. But the faces in the beginning were awesome!

ABNOCTO responds:

This was one of my first attempts to use Anime Studio Pro. I perfectly know what you're talking about but after wasting 2 hours to make a 20 second teaser i decided to publish anyway XD If you watch the actual first episode you can already see a certain improvement about the "false" 3D (It looks like more ps one castlevania game rather than N64 shooter ). BTW thank you

[The Pug]

You have good timing. The lip sync is purdy dang good. You have all the building blocks to make something great, and you will get there if you keep at it!

[miss mouse episode 2]

This is a good animatic. I like the style. Nice line work and consistent portions, well done.
I can see you tried to render a color 0% opacity chroma key, to crop out your characters without photoshop. I suggest looking up tips on what to do there, maybe adjust the brightness on your scanner?

Either way, keep up the good work!

["15 seconds to live" April '07 RubberOnionBattle]

Haha! Great idea, turned out purdy damn good

[Another Man's Treasure]

The timing is great! i love it

[POP TARTS: Extended Cut]

I love it, well done!

[Stumps Field- Pilot Episode]

Not bad, I like the humor. good jokes. My suggestion would be to add some real sound effects, I get some from freesound.org , you can also get some sound effects and music from freepd.com .
Also, the eyes not moving is distracting in a weird way. Facial movement during dialog will draw the eye to the character, so the viewer will not be distracted by other movement on the screen. This goes the same if you add a tongue for "L" syllables, and scrunch the bottom lip for "F" syllables. In this style you could maybe bend the bottom jaw to do that.
The space ship is awesome, good work there. and keep it up, i liked it.
hope i was of some help.

outerflesh responds:

Hey thanks Eric. Its good feedback. Ill have to take that into consideration. It is kind of awkward how the eyes never blink. I made them to appear to be puppets. I also made the cartoon VERY tame, as it is the pilot episode. Its going to get pretty narly soon. Thanks for watching man.

[Meatfist the conqueror]

Not bad at all man. I love the random gory shit. good length, and enough story line to keep interest. Good job man.

[GobbitsIV]

Very random. lol. and, I agree with the other comment. a little more story and length will go a long way.

[NASTYdotMOV]

Haha, much different than your other videos. But still left thinking "Wtf did I just see" good stuff