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Boob Punch. Well done, there is a ton of action!

SuperLME responds:

I know! There's always a groin shot gag in movies and television. Why is it there's never a female version? You hardly ever see it the other way around.

-Lax

I dig the joke ^_^

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Thanks Eric!

Looks pretty good. This would be something fun to put on an animated series, while characters play video games.

Ha, that bunny is a jerk. very well drawn, the movement looks great! Good traditional look with clean smears.

i love the lip sync, good stuff!

Well animated, well written! love the style variety of characters

Ha! FUCKIN TROLLLLL

Nice! The backgrounds look purdy good! The heads of the dinosaurs look great. I got some tips and tricks... It kind of looks obvious when you cut corners, especially with textures on the rocks and bushes, you can kind of fix this by slightly adjusting colors and brightness, but i would try steering away from that. It would have been cool to have the bushes in a symbol in which they move, so you could set them to single frame as a standard on the timeline, and as the characters pass each one, set to Loop. so it appears as they brushed against the bushes.
the trees look really good, (i cant even tell how you made them). I really like the variety of color and texture on the trees. That being said, having a highly detailed background, and low level detail on characters, is conflicting and a bit distracting. I would suggest either adding some more texture to the characters, or maybe putting a slight blur to the background.
Darkening the back layer of trees would give a slight illusion of distance, rather than brightening.

anyways, i hope this was hopefully and not annoying. Keep it up brotha

~Eric Polley

KatolSteele responds:

Aha ha! thanks bro. This was a good critique. As always, I have room to improve and I will take all these into consideration. Thanks man

Fantastic, clean smooth animation, funny stuff!

You have good timing. The lip sync is purdy dang good. You have all the building blocks to make something great, and you will get there if you keep at it!

i make things.

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