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Not bad, I like the humor. good jokes. My suggestion would be to add some real sound effects, I get some from freesound.org , you can also get some sound effects and music from freepd.com .
Also, the eyes not moving is distracting in a weird way. Facial movement during dialog will draw the eye to the character, so the viewer will not be distracted by other movement on the screen. This goes the same if you add a tongue for "L" syllables, and scrunch the bottom lip for "F" syllables. In this style you could maybe bend the bottom jaw to do that.
The space ship is awesome, good work there. and keep it up, i liked it.
hope i was of some help.

outerflesh responds:

Hey thanks Eric. Its good feedback. Ill have to take that into consideration. It is kind of awkward how the eyes never blink. I made them to appear to be puppets. I also made the cartoon VERY tame, as it is the pilot episode. Its going to get pretty narly soon. Thanks for watching man.

guess i didn't make the cut :P

rubberonion responds:

i love that you submitted something and we'll talk about it on the podcast... your video, reason i didn't include it, and a solution i have around that for the future

I dig it, unique style and beautifully done

airman4 responds:

Thanks sir !

not bad. i know these things take some time. your proportions are great. keep it up

Matsuemon responds:

Yah, was a little under the gun on this one. Was going for more of a cartoony look, like Batman: The Brave And The Bold, are something similar =)

Your character design is unique, and the lip sync are great .

CamoSenpai responds:

Thank you

HA. well done

rubberonion responds:

thanks!

Love it. Simple, minimalist animation. Short and gets the story told. Good work :)

TofuBrothers responds:

Thanks!!

Maybe add "Animatics" to the title. I do like the color, and character design.

PancakeSamurai responds:

Yeah I know what you mean. This was created about a year ago and originally uploaded to YouTube. Since this first episode I definitely adding things such as lip sync and gradients, etc. I'll be upload those new videos to Newgrounds soon, otherwise they are already on YouTube.
Thank for you feed back!

This made me think of fantastic planet, and I can see some fat-pie inspiration. right?

NickZweig responds:

thanks for all the compliments! fat pie sounds familiar but i dont think ive seen anything theyve done. most of these things i start with no clear goal and them im like oh hey i could do this and it would be pretty funny. like that walking purple dude id done the night before bc i was bored and then i was like hey i can use him in this!. so i did and i was good.

i make things.

eric polley @ericpolley

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